Tuesday, April 28, 2009

The Naughty Librarian Loves a Hot 'Exhibition'

Title: "Exhibition"
Chapters: one-shot
Words: 4,387
Reviews: 132
Summary: Bella is compelled to attend an art gallery for class and comes away with a much deeper appreciation for photography. A softer one-shot example for the D/s Birthday Contest – GRAPHIC LEMON ExB



Who among us hasn't fantasized about standing alone, being approached by a beautiful stranger? Having him come up from behind, sweeping our hair away to lean down and whisper in a sensitive ear, "...there is something about you that is drawing me, inspiring to me." His next move, whisking away and seducing...

Umm...yes, please?

DefinatelyStaying has a knack for taking any and every desire your mind can conceive of and turning it into amazing, hot fantasy fiction. Whether you prefer adventurous Edward and Bella with or without a side of friendly neighbors and friends (Fantasies , Next Weekend), a tasty taboo Jasper/Bella/Emmett trio (Boom Shakalaka), or her current hit featuring submissives Jasper and Bella and their Dom, Master Edward (The Forbidden Room), DefinatelyStaying dishes up a veritable smorgasbord of delicious fan fiction that will entice, titillate and satisfy any who sit at her banquet table.

Exhibition is one such delicacy. Bella is visiting an art gallery to fulfill a college course requirement. She is relatively unimpressed with the work on display until she steps in front of four simple black-and-white eight-by-ten photographs. This quartet of beautifully erotic images takes her breath away, and little does Bella know she has captured the eye of the artist himself. He approaches her from behind and gives her a photographer's glimpse into what each of these four differently bound women, noted only as 'R, M, T and J,' felt and experienced. The unexpected comes, however, when Edward, our scrumptious shutterbug in black, asks Bella to be his next subject. Not a model, just a girl - our 'every girl' - Bella. Once again, just as in Twilight, I found myself longing to fill her shoes. Bella leaves the gallery with her mysterious stranger and while the shoot begins innocently enough, soon both artist and subject are desperate with need. I will refrain from spoiling the ending...

As I sat in our local coffeehouse and read this story for the first time (yes, I remember where I was...), I found myself squirming in my seat, wishing I were home with my husband. Instead, I was in a very public place with a hot healthy blush coloring my face and chest. As I'd come to expect, DefinatelyStaying had produced yet another captivating, alluring tale of desire, seduction and fulfillment - one I am pleased to report will be followed up shortly with Edward's point of view, an accompaniment one-shot entitled, The Muse.

If you have yet to partake of the bounty that is DefinatelyStaying, pull up a chair and enjoy her mouth-watering morsel, Exhibition, today.

DefinatelyStaying, better known to many of us around the fandom as Trish, is the author of sixteen stories. She also authors a fanfiction blog, where she posts links for her stories as well as her personal fanfic recommendations. Trish is a gifted writer, a beautiful soul & an amazing friend.

Saturday, April 25, 2009

Emily is Corruptible

Well hell how did it get to be my turn for a get you know you post already? I hate to write a bio on myself so I thought perhaps I would interview a few of my favorite PP girls and see what they say about me.

Wait is that such a good idea? Whatever, I can always edit their comments to make me look less deviant. But then again being deviant is FUN.

Beks- So this one time I was thinking about Em butt-ass naked...I mean...I could go on about Em, my sweet, sexy Mami, for hours, but I'll leave that to Nina, you long winded bitch. Hehehe.

I think all of the ladies of the PP can agree with me when I say that Em pretty much defies all laws of nature and reality-- when it comes to meeting people online. Is she actually smoking hot? Yes. Is she probably the nicest person I have met? I think so. You would have to force Em to say a bad word against anyone she's just so damn sweet.

Can she write her pervy ass off? Yes and thank god. It would have broken my heart if I had to tell her the chapters of Strength In Yielding she asked me to beta sucked ass. I would have told her though, then begged to be forgiven, Mami style ;). She's the reason I'm involved with all these lovely ladies and I am so glad I was smart enough to PM her about her Twi Avatar all those months ago.

She's so many things beyond an original Perv. Em's an amazing mom, a phenomenal photographer, a deliciously naughty texter (sorry Mami, I just had to brag) and most importantly a really fucking good friend. Did I mention she has a great rack?

Em -- thanks for letting me stalk you and for making me giggle-blush daily. I'm proud to be your Baby... MWAH!!!


Steph- so...what to say about em that hasn't already been said(yeah I procrastinated in true stephanie fashion and read what everyone else has written so far...i know i suck)? i'm pretty sure, if memory serves me correctly, that the first time i "met" em was on the thread for my story. she was so nice. that and she had some line about being a smut whore in her siggie so i knew we'd get along just fine. we bonded over many things: fics and BDB and ultimately started gchattin it up (the demise of any timely updates if you ask me). Since then we have shared a lot of stories and pictures (listen up, no one has seen mah tatas ok? i'm a very shy person) and just bonded.

she really is quite possibly the nicest one of the PP. that's not saying much though since so many of us sit at the bitch bench on a regular basis. i kid, i kid. but truly she's a sweetheart. even though she's busier than all hell, she still takes the time out to lend a listening ear, share ridiculous vajayjay stories from work, or send us pics to show off just how hot she is. it's rare, IMO to find a genuinely great person online (or in RL too...people are assholes generally speaking). not only is she a super hot MILF, she's also super talented. her PSing skills are responsible for many banners and she is a master behind the camera.

for some reason she was/is shy about her writing. luckily there were plenty of girls out to coax her from her hiding place and share a truly great fic: Strength in Yielding (which, btw em PLZ UPDATE SOON). you should all go and read and review. then PM her to hurry up. just kidding. like i said before, she's super busy and not just her updates suffer. we all suffer from not getting to talk with her as often as before. if only RL didn't get in the way. *sobs*

basically, i love em. you will too, i'm sure, after getting to know her a bit more!

Kas- For starters, let me say that "Kitty," (my pet name for Emily) is one of my favorite members of the PP. Not to say that the rest of the girls are any less, but instead to say that she and I connect in a manner that's a wee bit different than with the other girls (nope, not divulging details on that, *LOL*). Anywhoodle...outside of being the most pervalicious MILF (*winky-wink*) that I know, Em (as she's known in the PP) is sweet, thoughtful, supportive, & funny. Did I mention that she's a dirty girl, too? Oh, yeah. Dirrrrty - which makes her a perfect member of the Perv Pack.

Speaking of dirty, as some of you may know, Em is the author of a hot lil' fic called Strength in Yielding (GO.RUN.READ!), based on an uber sex-ay Dominant/submissive relationship between Emmett and Rosalie. You think that The Submissive was good? Well, yes, it was, but that's just fiction. Emily's Strength in Yielding is the REAL DEAL. The names may have changed to Em & Rose, but the hot sexin' (with a huge dose of UST) is 100% real. So, get thyself over to Fanfiction.net and read that little gem! And show my Kitty (Em, that is, you Pervs) some love! ;)


Nina- Nina- I met Em on Hope's TA thread and it was all downhill and up her skirt from there. You can meet people on the internet that you're friendly with, sure you can share certain traits with, hobbies etc. But how often do people come along that are an honest and genuinely nice person? Not often. That's what we found in Em. She's the complete package as a good friend, a wonderful perv, and a hot chick with latent lesbian tendencies and really what the fuck is better than that? Nothing.

So Em and the rest of us Pervs bonded, shared hideously inappropriate stories, made fun of our husbands, kids, families twatever, and most importantly I believe we've all seen each others tits at one point or another and holy ball sack batman does Em have a great fucking rack. I'm kidding (*shakes head no*)

So what can you take away from this little ditty? Probably nothing that you already didn't know. We're a group of profoundly pervy bitches and Em is one of the originals and one of the perviest, but ultimately? She is truly one of the best women I've ever been able to call a friend.


So now should I tell you the real story about me? I don’t think the real thing is as exciting as my twisted friends make me out to be. I am totally blushing at all they said about me. Damn I should do this more often, it is great for my ego. MWAH pervs!

<------This is me and yes those are my tits. When I asked what pic I should put up this is the only one that my pervs suggested. I think they just wanted to see my rack again. Pft, they have all seen much more of me than this.

So I am OIP Em aka Emily. I am recently 36 and still feel like I am 18 (you know just barely legal). I am currently living in the Cullen’s home state of Washington and fuck me I have yet to find any of those boys lurking about in my backyard. I am married to a guy who rolls his eyes and makes fun of me and my Twi obsession but under it all he enables me. He works in the media and got me tickets to a sneak peak of the film and also picked up BD at midnight for me on his way home from a release party that he was covering for work. Despite that he thinks I am strange for my vamp loving ways and even stranger that I could meet a bunch of pervy girls and a bi-boy from a book series that was the ultimate cockblock.

So how did I get to this point? It is a long and twisted road but the short version is that there was this epic long thread about Twilight on a photography forum that I read and I finally checked to see what the fuss was about. Everyone was raving about Edward and since I love to read I thought what the hell I will give it a shot. I had never read any vampire books before and I did not know it was a young adult book when I first started reading. As I read the first chapters I was like WTF, this is set in high school? But I was quickly hooked –duh; that was March of last year and I read all 3 books in 5 days. I ignored my kids- yes I am a mom to two boys ages 6 and 4, ignored my house and ignored my husband.

<---Here are my boys, don’t worry they survived on pop-tarts and yogurt.

I pimped out the books to the girls at work and we all laughed about how we wanted a marble hard man like Edward. There is no such thing as TMI at my office because I work in the Pussy Palace aka OB/Gyn department. Ask the PP girls: I have scared them all with stories about things removed from lady bits. I see genitals everyday and get paid for it. I can tell you that on average women under 35 are sporting hard wood and women over 35 can be bare all the way to full 70’s bush :shudders: Envy me!

Anyway back to Twi…I wound up on SM’s website looking for movie news because it was being filmed about 10 miles from my house and I wanted the scoop, that lead me to Twilight Moms and then to FF and finally to Twilighted. I never thought I would be such a geek to read fan fic but once I saw how good some of it is I was hooked. I was too shy at first (WTF, me shy?!) to post much on the Twi threads but Hope and Izzy brought me out of my shell on the TA/PW&J thread and the rest is history. Kasey took me on as her kitty –RAWR and then my life changed when I got a PM from Beks. She needed photoshop help and we instantly connected. Who knew I would find one of my best friends on a fic forum.

My very first foray into FF was Sacrifices by Enthralled (I know, I know it was recommended by Beks last week, but really it is that good) it was recommended on Twilight Moms but when the “M” rating went away from Twilight Moms so did I.

I then went looking for something equally as engaging –and with some smut and stumbled across AH/AU. I was not sold on the idea of human Cullen’s but dove in head first.

Boycotts and Barflies by vjgm cemented my love of AH/AU fic. I mean who does not love sexy Eddie, Jasper and Emmett shaking their ass to So Hott? Now there is a body shot that I wish I could be a part of.

From there I read voraciously and left all my smut novels untouched for ff. The poor dears are getting dusty, perhaps I should rub them, er I mean the dust off.

Realize by Goo82 caught my attention because it had a very long and active thread on Twi. The UST in this fic made me tense and want to scream at Bella and Edward. How can two smart people be so ignorant to their feelings for each other?

I LOL at Cullenary Education: Forks Sex Ed by MarcyJ Sex ed(ward) is funny anyway but when you combine that with an empath vampire and one who can read thoughts you have a hilarious read. I actually passed it out to some of the girls at work and it started their own fanfic obsession. I guess you could call me the office Twi pimp.

I am not a writer at all but I was convinced to start writing a fic of my own. (the girls linked it above and really it is not as good as they say it is) I say start because I got three chapters in and have not updated in forever! I suck; but that is another story and I’ll get around to it someday when my life is not so busy. Although I think I need to write Rose’s side of Me & Mrs. McCarty for Beks first before she kicks my ass.

Maybe I should have the “best sandwich ever” fire off some dirty texts and bust out Barney for inspiration…

-Em

Thursday, April 23, 2009

"Midnight Desire" by Twilightzoner







Our Guest Reviewer this week is psymom!



This week's Perv Pack Recommendation is...

Title: "Midnight Desire"
Author: Twilightzoner
Chapters: 25 (will be completed today)
Words: 91,144
Reviews: 3,615
Summary: An All Human parody of Midnight Sun. AH, AU and consequently OOC. No blood lust - just uncontrollable human lust. Smut filled fun . . .



Guest Reviewer - psymom- I first met Twilightzoner when I was the Twilighted Beta for her incredible AU story, “Vicissitudes.” When she posted the final chapters of the story I went to her, this woman I hardly knew, and shamelessly said, “WTF?! You skipped the smut? PLEASE tell me there is an outtake with the smut!”

She still owes me that damn outtake, but a little thing called ‘Midnight Desire’ got in the way.

Twilightzoner said, “I’ll write the outtake, but first, I have an idea for another piece that will be nothing but smut. It should be quite filthy, actually.”

Color psymom thrilled… “Filthy it is! I’ll take it! You want me to beta? Even better!”

And so it began, Midnight Desire, Twilightzoner’s version of Midnight Sun in which she attempted to replace Edward’s blood-lust with just LUST. PURE LUST.

Mmmmmmmmmmmm….

Midnight Desire is the story of human Edward, consumed by his attraction to human Bella. But this is no ordinary attraction. This is a “most people think I’m in the closet because I never date…it’s really just that none of these brainless bitches are the least bit attractive to me…idiots, all of them…but, wait…who’s this new girl…OMG.I.HAVE.TO.FUCK.HER….NOW” kind of attraction. In reality, for me anyway, it’s what I kind of hoped was really going through Edward’s mind in Twilight all along… *smirk*

So why is Midnight Desire such a great story? Twilightzoner and I have had this discussion about Twilight on many occasions — “WHY IS TWILIGHT SO POPULAR? What is it that people love about it?” Well, I think the answer is the same for both – she has captured the essence of the whole Twilight phenomenon in this story…it’s desire. The desire to be desired, specifically. Who wouldn’t want to be the object of Edward’s desire? Nothing could be more intoxicating...to be desired by one that you desire is a most desirable predicament.

For MD Edward, or wankward as he is affectionately known to his fans, his desire mimics that of Twilight’s Edward. He wants Bella. He wants to consume her, to claim her as his own, to wipe out all those that stand in the way of making that happen. The parallels between vampiric desire and sexual desire are undeniable and Midnight Desire simply spells out that sexual tension that underlies Edward and Bella’s relationship in Twilight.

One of the greatest feats that Twilightzoner accomplished in this story is writing one of the smuttiest stories in the fandom, with no actual intercourse until the last quarter of the story. The resulting Unresolved Sexual Tension (UST) is delicious torture and once Edward moves from fantasy-driven self-service sex to “everything but” with Bella, Twilightzoner manages to maintain the level of eroticism with varied positions, locations, and every imaginable push of the boundaries Edward has imposed on their physical relationship. When they finally consummate their love it is done with realism and a sort of bleak sincerity that makes the reader both laugh and cry with the couple. As their union becomes more perfect, we are rewarded with some of the most beautiful prose in Twilight smutfic…
I buried myself inside her, reveling in the primal connection, exciting untamed
passions I had only previously suspected I possessed. And in my head, I seemed
to hear a rhythmic chorus of “mine, mine”. She was mine now – I had made it so.
My love for her knew no bounds, but at that moment delight in my possession of
her rang just as strong. To see her, so delicate, so helpless, her fragile body
writhing, trapped under mine, sent a savage thrill through me. And her
shattering vulnerability only emphasized the knowledge of my own. I was
powerless before her . . . and would be for all time.

No review of Midnight Desire would be complete without a discussion of the Monster—that character that became the undeniable star of the show, the living, breathing symbol of Edward’s baser instincts, and a comical representation of Twilight Edward’s opinion of himself. The monster has no secrets, and if he had a cock, he would wear his constant erection proudly. The monster took on a life and a fanbase of his own, and while he surely brought comic relief to Edward’s pain and suffering in his attempts to resist Bella, he will always be remembered for his most graceful and mirthless exit, when Edward and Bella were reunited after their run in with James. This scene was especially poignant because it represented the monster’s death in a sense…Edward’s desire was no longer too primal for Bella. Their commitment to each other was sealed the moment they came together in that powerful and emotionally raw encounter. There was no longer anything “monstrous” about the Edward—their love, their lust, their desire, was clearly mutual.

Not to worry, Monster, for you death is not the end. I have a feeling there’s a long line of willing imaginary companions that are dying to be your Midnight Desire.
After all, Monster is the new vampire.


Emmy- I think I was first drawn to Midnight Desire after the bombing out that was only 12 brilliant chapters of the book I am dying to read Midnight Sun.. I started Midnight Desire when it was maybe a third of the way through and was initially grabbed by the fact it deals with a lusty Edward – desperate for Bella. I love sexual tension and sexual frustration. I find it terribly erotic and so I get very excited when I find a story that does it as well as Midnight Desire does.. I also was drawn by the brilliant humour and comedy found within Midnight Desire. But as my fellow pervs are saying – there is so much more within this tale. Edward has more than just bust lust for Bella. Wankward is desperate for every inch of her: Mind, body and soul. There is such a parallel to the original story not just with Edward and the conniving interloper’s an innocent on the surface Bella, not believing her luck and not understanding her appeal, who under the surface has her own cock lust on the go. I love wankward - he is so spot on for a 17 year old boy, but also manages to contain most of what we love about the 108 year old virgin in the novel. He battles his desire wanting only the best for Bella, although he is only human and his control is nowhere near as vice like...

One of the best things about Wankward is his little friend, the little devil on his shoulder who is I suppose the physical manifestation of all of Wankward’s bottled up and out of control bust lust: the monster. So many moments of comic genius come forth from this inspirational character. The monster has his fun – he looks up Bella’s skirt whilst they are on a picnic, throws petals during the big seduction and is happiness incarnate when they find out that their girlfriend swallows..

I enjoyed this story oh so much. Not just for the laughs, incredibly sexy tom-foolery and then intense connection, the deep burning love, the hysterical cheeky chappy of the monster but for it all in combination. It’s a unique fiction that can’t be compared to any other that I have read. It’s a brilliant tale full of everything you would want. Belly laughs, emotional tenderness and *teary* connections, and fizzy tart lemonade by the gallon. I cannot fault this tale or tell you to read it enough. Please do go read it. 5 out of 5 knickers in the monsters sweaty palms from me.

Emily- I have read about half of this story. Real life got in the way and I have not been able to pick it back up. Not because I did not love the monster but because my own little monsters are keeping me way busy. I love the chapters I have read and it is defs on my list to read from start to finish as soon as I can steal some time.

Hope-
This is the story that started my whole self-pleasing Edward fascination. I love it when Edward takes matters into his own hands, I just do. Viva La Wankward. This is one of the first fanfic I ever read in this fandom. It had me hooked from the very first chapter when Edward was perplexed and a little sickened to his intense, immediate and overwhelming reaction to Bella. Oh and this story is fucking hilarious, we are in Wankward's head the entire time and it is utterly delightful and makes me laugh. TZ perfectly channels the 17yo male here, or at least how I assume a 17yo male would think.

Edward's desire for Bella starts out as purely sexual, creating fantasies of taking and claiming her, pleasing her and himself in the process. The poor boy spends more time in the shower trying to get rid of his perma-erection and plotting elaborate fantasies involving Bella than anything else. But as he tries to resist Bella, his problem just gets worse and worse. The Bella Swan Resistance Plan goes into effect and morphs and changes as the story progresses. Wankward finally decides he has had enough and must have Bella for his own, but she doesn't some easy and makes him to work for it. He finally gets her and we see that she is just as enamored with him as he is with her. And also maybe feels the same desires that he has been feeling as well. I wouldn't call this a parody, maybe a parallel instead. Sure it’s fucking funny and the characters are human, but it follows Twilight in plot and events with little twists and tweaks along the way. One of the best Midnight Sun like stories I have read for sure.

Now let’s talk about the star of the story…the monster. The monster is a figment of Edward’s imagination and the manifestation of his desire and want of Bella. He’s such a cute little thing and has some of the best moments in the whole story. My cohorts have quoted him and some of his antics, so I will leave it up to them for that. But really you need to go read about him yourself in the story.

So I guess I should talk about the smut for a bit. Well it’s fantabulous. TZ writes it in such a way that we feel the love and desire that Edward feels for Bella and his want to pleasure her always. And ya know get himself off as well. There is always a comical lilt to the smut, but it only enhances the steaminess and sexiness of the smut, not detracting from it. TZ truly is a master at the art of smut writing.

I love this story and easily has a permanent place in my top 10 favs of all time. It’s funny, sweet, loving, witty, snarky and utterly steamy and cold shower worthy. 5 panties out of 5.

Beks- This was actually one of the first fics I started reading on Twilighted. I will say that I hate angsty fics. My fellow PPers can confirm that I am of the mind that actual life has enough drama and pain in it that I don't really like spending my free time reading about it. Thank God I got my hands on this little gem. Midnight Desire is fucking hilarious, but in all the best possible ways. This story has so many priceless one liners...

"The monster whipped out a copy of the Kama Sutra and began dog earring pages." or "our girlfriend swallows . . . our girlfriend swallows . . .” and at no point I did I find myself thinking "this author thinks they are really funny, but they aren't".

Edward is a normal, extremely horny teenage boy and its great how he fights daily against his hormones and the monster, to respect his girlfriend. Bella is sweet and funny and the way TZ worked in James was very well done. Not to mention the smut is not only right on for their age, but way delicious. Edward's endless wanking isn't have bad either. hehehe. I am looking forward to checking out other fics from Twilightzoner. 4 out of 5

Kathy- Ah, Midnight Desire has been on my list for a while; I confess, I didn't read it in the beginning, only because I didn't know it existed. Once I found it, I devoured it quickly and became part of the anxious crowd that waits for updates. What's not to love about a fic that says outright it's all about the extreme lust?

From the beginning, this parody is hysterical. I don't think I've read a chapter that didn't make me laugh AND breathe heavily. I love that Bella sort of makes him work for it; when he asks her out and then admits he has no real plan, she basically tells him, ask me again when you get a clue. We haven't even gotten to the monster yet. Oh, Monster, how do I love thee? The monster makes me laugh on the regular, especially when acting out lewd things.

Edward stick to canon in many aspects; his adoration of Bella, his protectiveness, etc. Their first kiss is smokin' hot, after several chapters of some Edward self-lovin'. Once the BSR is in place, the comedy amps up even further, imho. However, while I love Wankward, I actually prefer the later chapters when they are together and it isn't just in his mind. I'm a sap that way, I can admit it. I loved that their first time together wasn't perfect.

There is an underlying storyline with James that is compelling, mixed in with the fantastical smut. I think I actually cried when I read the last line in Chapter 25. I cannot wait for the epilogue. Absofuckinglutely 5 panties out of 5 on this one.

Miya- I had something clever in here before but I can't remember what it was... I'll settle for saying that I loved it, laughed and lusted in all the appropriate spots, and that this is a story that will go down in Twilight fanfic history as "The Monster Story." Well done! 4.5 out of 5 panties.

Nina- Initially I wanted to just read the whole of Midnight Desire again and pick out my favorite "Monster' bits and just list them so that he felt special at the highlight of his finer moments throughout the story. Then I realized that that would take away from discussing Edward's cock, that between him and the esteemed monster are the stars of this amazing tale of lust.

Replacing the Midnight Sun Edward's blood-lust with hormonal teenage Edward's sexual lust is the basis for this hilarious, remarkably accurate story (at least in relation to the hormones of a 17 year old boy) that is in all sincerity some of the funniest, sexiest and clearly most entertaining stories I've read. It is also one of the lemoniest stories without having an actual lemon until well into the story.

The opening chapters we're educated on the canon history of the family, well the canon history TZ style. His immediate attraction to her, his um...immediate response to her etc. Chapter 4 "the van incident" is clearly the real account as Meyer intended to write it. As dear Edward cradled Bella's shaking form in his arms, she completely forgot to document his raging boner as an integral part of the scene. That's probably what actually stopped Tyler's fan. Though poor Edward is mortified that his body reacted so inappropriately with Bella that he's convinced that she's going to tarnish his reputation throughout the school.

The Bella Swan Resistance Plan is Edward's grand idea to resist the lusciously tempting siren that is Bella Swan, ultimately the only woman to ever get his (and subsequently Little Eddie's) attention. The plan is also put into place to try and protect himself from not only her feminine wiles but Edward's misreading of Bella being the typical catty, vapid high school girl like all the others.

But his cock's unrelenting pursuit to embarrass him at every inopportune moment causes Edward to shut Bella out hurting them both in the process. Though he's resolved to ignore her hoping that he can 'quit' her (sorry couldn't resist), the resistance plan only antagonizes his um...need to beat off at any and every opportunity.

Wankward and his fantasies are some of the most detailed wet dreams I think have ever been documented. I honestly at one point felt bad for his cock as he continued (sometimes multiple times a day) jackhammering his cock to a multiude of positions that he has dream Bella in. Doggie, reverse cowgirl (one of his favs), schoolgirl, on her knees whatever. His daily releases at one point had Esme thinking they needed a new water heater since he spent so much time beating off down the drain.

The Bella Swan Plan is the next step in dear Edward's quest to get the girl. Once he comes (hehe) to his senses, he decides that it's not just her ripe, ample bosom or her supple ass that he wants but also just her. The great thing about TZ's Edward is that underneath the screaming, humping, horndog he's a genuinely romantic, caring and hopelessly in love young man. He dreams of marrying her and protecting her, just as canon Edward did. He's mature far beyond his years as TZ modeled MD's Edward after the 108 year old character in Twilight.

The story isn't without it's dramatic turn, pitting creepy James against Edward in a trifle that paralleled that of the ballet studio except it was his lust and a couch instead of his madness and a studio. Aside from the villainous James, there are the smaller bits of drama in the form of Alice monopolizing Bella's time, Charlie and his cockblockery and the the typical trials and tribulations of being young, in love and essentially obsessed (in a non-creepy way) with your soul mate. And finally the sadness we all felt in the last chapter as the Monster bid his final adieu. I nearly shed a tear.

The "Monster"
Today the Monster will be revealed. TZ commissioned numerous artists to create her true depiction of how she envisions the Monster to look like. Okay maybe not all that but someone has created the Monster's likeness to TZ's specifications and I, like all of you, can't wait to see how it fits in relation to the wacked as fuck brain image I have of him. In my warped noggin, the Moster is a large, cartoony penis (yes, large in that way, all sorts of girthy and glorious) that walks on his testicles while flexing his biceps kissing them while he asks Bella if she wants tickets to the gun show. He also has his own 'mini monster' encased in a banana hammock.

As I'm typing this, I am thinking that the Monster lounging dramatically on Edward's leather couch, praising the mind of TZ while they sip a nice Remy Martin VSOP and share a Behike together in celebration of the epilogue and his...reveal.

5/5 for Midnight Desire and 10/5 for the Monster and I want to thank him again for last night.


Stephie- I stumbled upon MD after reading TZ's contribution in Saturday School. I had no idea the story even existed (oh what a sheltered ff life I led...). Once I found it though, I couldn't stop reading. I mean that too. From the moment of Edward's...little problem and his reluctant admittance to Carlisle (which had me cracking up btw), I was hooked.

One of the best things about Edward is that he is totally canon in my mind. Maybe that's because my mind is deep in the gutter at all times...but I always viewed the vamps as very sexual creatures. Once the blood lust is cleared away, there is only lust. And MD's Edward has all the characteristics from the books: very intellectual, isolated (of his own doing), horny...er...ok I know that's not in the books, but it should have been damn it.

He is ashamed by his reactions to Bella and feels the need to prepare himself/avoid her at all costs ("Bella Swan Resistance Plan") lest she discover the raging hard on straining in his pants: "I could just imagine explaining that to Carlisle. Well, Bella Swan noticed I had a massive erection while I was talking to her, so I’m just going to have to change schools . . ." bahaha. Too bad BSRP=lack of hot water, or just the need of a larger tank in order to supply Edward with the ability to work off his insatiable lust. His poor, poor tender cock...

Then the Monster makes its first appearance. Oh but do I love the Monster. I never had any sort of image in my head as to what he looked like...except for that character Wario from the Mario Bros games; all squat and chubby and mustachioed, grinning madly and leering at Bella. Ok...so maybe I did have some sort of image. Whatever. The introduction as Domo as the monster made me laugh all over again, and I even had my mini pose with the doll in order to share (she loves that version of the monster). There are so many great Monster moments:

sighing and giggling
tap dancing
swooning and pouting
theatrically wiping its brow
clasping its hands and raising its eyes to the little hearts circling around its head
wearing a flack vest in fear of Charlie, then a bowtie to impress him
twirling an imaginary mustache (see?!)
opening a trench coat to flash Bella

I could go on, because it only gets better, but I don't want to waste your time or give too many funny moments away with my adoration of the Monster. MD follows all the major points from the book: first interaction in Biology, the near fatal van of doom, meadow, trouble with James, etc etc. Only this is so much funnier and sexier and just...awesome. If you haven't read it yet, WTF ARE YOU WAITING FOR? MD is IMO a must read. And I'm so excited to see what the Monster looks like in TZ's genius mind. 5/5

~*~


In addition to our Round Table Review above, we've also asked Twilightzoner to share with us a bit about herself and subsequently the Monster...

I discovered Twilight early last year, deciding the books would make good vacation reading while traveling during my daughter’s spring break. That could have easily been the end of the story. However, my daughter had read HP fanfiction, so I knew of the existence of that world. After reading the first three books and wanting more, I decided to look online to see if there was any Twilight related fanfiction. Ha! Just a bit . . .

After delving into that world for about a month, I decided to try my hand. I wrote my first story, a one-shot titled Certain Revelations, and celebrated like crazy when I received four reviews. Almost immediately, Vicissitudes, my post Eclipse story, demanded to be written. And almost immediately after I started it, the concept for Midnight Desire – just a premise, really – started trying to push its way into my consciousness. I demanded that it wait patiently until I finished the prior story.

MD really began as an experiment, and I was not entirely confident in my ability to pull it off. My entire plan at the beginning was simply to substitute lust for bloodlust and see where it took me while generally following the Twilight story line. I had a very vague outline in my head of how it would be adapted. Obviously, Edward would feel extreme and unprecedented lust for Bella and he would try to resist acting on that lust, thus creating a human version of Twilight.

After the first couple of chapters, I would read the next chapter of Twilight and think about ways to adapt it. For instance, human Edward couldn’t spring onto the roof and enter Bella’s bedroom undetected, so instead, he stood in the woods by her house and imagined what it would be like to be there. Without going into details, I’d just like to add that it was incredible fun sexually tormenting Edward.

The monster was only a twinkle in Edward’s eye in Chapter 1. It was born in Chapter 4 and took on full form by Chapter 7. As the story evolved, the monster became a steady form of comic relief, and I am exceedingly grateful to the little bugger. The monster now resides with me, but is often out whoring around and visiting adoring fans. It also spends time tormenting Ksangi, the “President” of its “unofficial fan club”, making unreasonable and ridiculous demands for attention and accolades.

Today, the epilogue of MD will be posted, and the story will officially end, other than some extras to come. Throughout the story, reviewers have told me how they picture the monster, and some have graciously asked how I envision it. With some help from very talented people, the monster now has a visage, and it will be revealed tonight on the MD thread at Twilighted. The monster also wants me to tell you that t-shirts with its image will be available at Twilighted, and encourages you to buy them all to help support Twilighted. Honestly, the ego on this guy . . .

In ending, I would like to thank the Perv Pack for reviewing MD, psymom for being the world’s best beta, and everyone who has taken the trouble to review the story. I don’t have the time to acknowledge every review, but I read them all and appreciate them beyond measure, that is, when I can pull the monster away from surfing porn and googling its name on the computer. Sigh.

Wednesday, April 22, 2009

Emmy needs to change her knickers!




Author: Hammondgirl
Chapters: one-shot
Words: 5,547
Reviews: 147
Summary: Edward is the new guy in Bella's office. He's a complete geek, which is actually her undoing. She fantasizes about him at work constantly. An entry to the Dirty Talking Edward Contest. BxE, A/H, A/U, OOC. Rated M for a yummy geeky lemon!



Hello dear lover-ly pervlings, & fellow perv's,



Yup you are hearing from me again this week, get comfy - you know how I like to prattle..
:)



Its my turn to pick just one slice of lemon tart with a large serving of clotted cream for you.. & I must say its a tough call. There are so many good one's out there.. However when I first knew we were going to be doing this, I thought of hammondgirl. hammondgirl is yet another lovely author who I discovered, back in October, when she started writing to enter a competition... I love everything she has done. I love her Resident Advisor & its slow build with the mutually smitten but clueless B/E who I call "my favourite hesitators". At first I couldn't decide between her one-shots, Shampoo (Edward has a base reaction to a summertime memory of a younger Bella..) and what I went for - Change of Underwear, for my pick.



Change of Underwear combines a few of my favourite Edible Edward ElementsTM: geeky, with a dirty yet silver tongue, and OfficeWard... *sigh* - what more could you wish for really? Hammondgirl writes really nicely, I love Bella's narration in this, her thoughts, and sometimes her actions, entertainingly run amok at the mere presence of Mr Masen.. The premise of this tempter is straightforward: A new colleague (Edward), is pretty awkward and overlooked by the entire workforce, but his spec's appeal is causing B to desecrate many pairs of knickers, (by the end of this fic you will too! ;] ).


Bella gets caught up in a haze of fantasies. Her imagination runs rampant whilst she waits every week for him to personally deliver his report to her.. Will they ever be more than fantasies, will he hand deliver more than a report to her this week? Read this tasty wee morsel to discover, and keep your change of underwear to hand... You don't want to be caught short needing new knickers like Emmy...

Sunday, April 19, 2009

Whatchu know bout me... Get to know Lipsmacked just a little bit better!

<---- my actual mouth and super straight teeth

I'll start off by saying the picture of me has been limited to the mouthal region because my mother works for the government and asked me very nicely to not embarrass her or my father, but I think if someone I knew found this it would take them a hot five seconds to put two and two together. Also Nina has this weird thing with my lips. (watch out Nina, Em never gave her consent. Just a heads up.)

Beks aka Lipsmacked here, filling the minority quota for Brown folks in the PP. I'm 26. I live in Los Angeles, but I'm from New Hampshire. I miss seasons. I don't miss feet and feet of snow from October to April. I go by Lipsmacked or Lipglossed on every forum because I don't wear make-up and I never have. But I DO have a monster lip gloss collection. I have a intellectually thugalicious boyfriend named Tony, or T as the Pack refers to him, who I have been with for 8 years.
<----T's face twin... sorta
I don't know when we're getting married, so don't ask. He looks like Ice Cube in this picture, but not Ice Cube walking around or in Are We There Yet? If that makes sense.

I'm a raging bi-sexual, hence my love of slash fic, mostly of the Alice/Bella persuasion. It's no secret, don't worry. I like my men tri-racial and my ladies busty with a fat ass. I love music. I love movies. I will watch Girls Just Want to Have Fun, Willow and Coming to America over and over again. I love books. And I love to dance. I like puppies, spaghetti dinners and long walks on the beach. Death cage matches and light bondage. I'm a total Daddy's girl in more ways than one (hehehe, Jo). I'm a fan of NPRs Morning Addition and A Prairie Home Companion. I would marry James Taylor or Christopher Plummer if my time machine was working.
<--- Captain Von DoMe

The only television shows I watch are cartoons and shows about murder investigations on A&E. I love Wonder Woman and I think her and Batman need to just tie the knot already. I hate the NBA, but I love Shaq. I think Twitter is stupid. (yeah that's right, Angelface)


I've had a million jobs... librarian, 6th grade teacher, meter maid. I have life ADD. I spent some time as the lube specialist at an erotic boutique here in LA. I miss testing the nipple clamps and whips, learning more about the new lubricants on the market and selling steel butt plugs and gay porn to celebs. (I see you Rupert Everett.) Ahh.. good times. I still find myself giving people toy/sex advice, because I don't really have the phrase TMI in my lexicon and I guess I just make people feel comfy enough to open up to me. (Its the lips.) And yes Hope, vaginal fisting wins out over rimming every time.

I am an avid Jake lover. Jake. Not Taylor. I fell in love with him somewhere between the kiss in Eclipse and a Breaking Dawn release party. Don't get me wrong, I love all the Cullen boys, but I just have a soft spot for Jake. I don't think him and Bella belong together though. Not at all. If I had to chose a Cullen boy it would be Emmett. Edward and I would kill each other.

<---- my Jake


I currently work for Disney, in film and television production. Yeah I know. I read and write graphic Twi smut and I work for the Mouse. The funny part of is my co-workers are well aware of my Twi obsession. A few of them have read my smut. They thoroughly enjoyed it.

I actually started reading Twilight for my job. We were "researching" the teen market and one day my executive producer walked into the room holding a copy of Twilight and said "WHO WANTS TO READ THIS?". I had no fucking clue what it was about, but I figured, "Hey I like books. Why not." BIG MISTAKE.

Or was it....

I read the first three books in four days. We weren't shooting anything and technically I was doing research, so I sat on our production designers couch for four days and read the first three books. When I was finished she wanted to shoot me because I would shut up about them. She has since caved and read all four books and is now just as in love with Edward and Co. as I am.

Work also lead me to the world of Twi fic. My boss was closing the doors on his fanfiction site in my early days with Disney. After finding out about my Twi-problem another co-worker pointed me towards some pretty good and some pretty bad Twi fic that was about to be pulled down from their site. I liked what I saw and during a case of writer's block I suffered while working on a screenplay for work, I wrote my first two one-shots, the companion pieces In His Dreams and In Her Dreams. I was shocked that people actually read them and even more shocked that people actually liked them.

I kept writing, diving into the post BD New School and the pre-Eclipse Baby Steps . Up to that point I had a severe distaste for AH-AU stories, but one day an idea for fic popped into my head and there was NO WAY I could squeeze it into the canon time line. I had too much respect for the established relationships and something about a vamp Rose and a were-Jacob, going at it behind Emmett's back just didn't feel right. After a long walk to Cold Stone Creamery So Obvious worked itself out, my first AH-AU story and I haven't looked back since. Baby Steps was well received by the 40 people who read it, but something about this Jake I created really drew people to the So Obvious.

Since then, I have focused manly on AH-AU stories. I have five stories going right now and I need to finish one soon. (Baby Steps will be the first one done for those of you who are just aching to know.) So Obvious is my baby because it led me to these lovely ladies. I have to say my favorite story to write is Lost then Found , a Bella/Alice slash fic that takes place in the DC Universe of Wonder Woman. Trust me its not as geeky as it sounds. I wrote it as a lesbo love-fest for my PP ladies and it has led to quite a few readers opening up to their inner tribber (look it up).

I don't write for my readers. I write to keep from driving my car up on the sidewalk on my way into work. Sorry. I've seen a lot of fics that have morphed in reaction to reviews or comments on the forums. I have had people make a lot of requests for my characters and I just can't do it. I do however reply to every review. :) I don't always proofread that well before I post, but I just getting so freaking excited that the damn chapter is finished. Excuse any typos. I mean well.

I have read so many stories that I have loved, oddly enough a lot of them were written by members of the PP before there was a PP.

We have rec'd several of them, but I wouldn't feel right without mentioning:

Sacrifices by Enthralled:
After rebuilding her life when Edward does not return in New Moon, Bella is reunited with Cullens. You find out in the first few chapters that Bella married Jake, had a child with him, and was shortly after turned by Victoria as revenge for killing Laurent. This story is crazy long, but so good. I read all 53 chapters in 2 or 3 days. The story just drew me in and I couldn't put it down. It's the first multi-chapter fic I read, so it holds a special place in my heart.

Alpha's Female by Swill122:
A one shot for now, but I'm praying she continues it. Nessie and Jake, some time after BD, are together in a magical, loving D/s relationship. It's really fucking hot.

Silence by JCara: Basically all the events following New Moon, but Bella is deaf. It is a really cool story so far and I wish the writer had more time to pay attention to it.

Evading the Orbit by TrampyVampies:
An AMAZING one shot so far about Jasper hesitantly falling in love with his best friend Edward. The writing is really fucking good and the entire time I was reading I found myself wishing this author had something published that I could buy.

I hope to have time to read more and to have more time to write. For now I'll be busy getting a rise out of my man, looking for songs to bone him to, praying to God Em writes the second chapter to Me and Mrs. McCarty like she said she would and of course... chasing the best. sandwich. ever!


Thanks for letting me ramble. MWAH!!

< ---- P.S. In case you didn't know.

Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Fiberkitty's Reminder to Breathe



Title: "Breathe"
Author: Adair7
Chapters: one-shot
Words:
4,469
Reviews: 60

Summary: Jasper uses his powers to help Bella and Edward release some sexual tension. Smut. Jasper/Bella/Edward action, that means a THREESOME. If that squicks you out, don't read it.



The Powers That Be of Organization emailed me on Monday. "Miya, you're up for the one-shot rec this week." Me, I don't read one-shots unless they're for my contests or one of the Perv Pack smacks me over the head with it and says, "read this, dammit." I just don't have time to hunt down one-shots when there are so many absolutely fanfuckingtastic multi-chapter fics.

So, I went to my bookmarks and looked at the handful of one-shots I saved for proper appreciation later. Yes, I've enjoyed them time and time again, but I always come back to them because they're that good.

Then, I noticed something- they were all by the same author. Adair7. Yes, the one who writes Grey and a ton of other awesome stories that are a guaranteed good read.

Fiberkitty, being a good pervy reader, I went to my binder o' smut that is kept under the bed. Some new batteries in my rabbit, a good bit of reading, and a few orgasms later, I found my recommendation.

Breathe starts with the tried and true angle of Jasper is frustrated over Edward being an annoying prude who won't just get it on already. When the rest of the family goes away for a weekend hunt, leaving the three of them at home, the fun begins. Alice, future seeing meddling sprite that she is, gives Jasper the parting words of, "Take it easy on them."

Jasper refuses to relieve the tension without consent from all involved parties. It's later, when Edward and Bella are enjoying a good night kiss, that he finds his sought permission. He comes into Edward's bedroom, throws Edward against the door and kisses Bella. Okay, so no permission for that, but he goes on to explain what he feels every time Edward leaves Bella with blue clit.

The image that gets me every time:
"I waited for Edward to strike, to take down Jasper, but it never happened. Instead I felt Edward move up behind me, his delicate kisses making their way up my neck, his tongue cold but pleasurable as it played with my earlobe."

If you were Bella, wouldn't you want your first time with both Edward and Jasper? You've got protection against being bitten to a degree- at least of being drained, protection against badly named babies, plus you have Jasper to relax you through the sting and discomfort of your first time while Edward loses his virtue.

Fiberkitty says you should read "Breathe" (and review) or you all get a session with Dark Salvation's Master Aro.

Sunday, April 12, 2009

4theluvofmary here to SAVE YOU the trouble of getting to know me

That ^^ was my lame attempt at being “clever.” But we’ll come to that later. It’s my turn to astound you with details of my extravagant lifestyle. So allow myself to introduce…myself. The name is Stephanie. I’m recently 25. I have been married for 4 years this May. Yes I know, that means I got married young. Thanks. I also have a wee one known to many as Mini who is 18 months. I could go on and on about just how damn cute she is, but I’ll let the picture do the talking for me.
Moving on to more “pertinent” matters.

I first discovered Twilight during the month of August 2007. I remember it well; I was 7 months preggo and bored at work since I decided I was entitled the luxury of sitting and doing pretty much nothing whenever I wanted to. ***Although, it is my belief that a pregnant woman has every right to sit on her ass whenever she so pleases since all of her time is spent GROWING A CHILD. Anyone agree with me? Mothers, raise your hands. You know you want to.*** Some coworkers were insisting I read this story about vampire love. Not just any vampire love…teenager vampire love. I’m not afraid to admit that my first thoughts were WTF? That sounds like a horrible idea for a book! Funny, right? I finally gave in, bought the book, still slightly hesitant despite the check out lady’s declaration of love towards it. Naturally I read the book in one day.

The next day I paid a visit to my dear sister and told her I had read this book called Twilight. “Oh I have the second book if you want to borrow it.” She knew about the book…I mean series..and she didn’t tell me before now?! What kind of a sister… Seriously, I was pretty disappointed that she had not been the one shoving the books in my hand in the first place. Still, I walked away with her copy of New Moon in my possession.

I read it all that night and of course was too eager to read Eclipse to wait to borrow her copy. Screw that, I’m goin to fuckin Barnes & Noble. I bought Eclipse and New Moon…ya know, so I could go back to reread and really act out my budding obsession.

But once I finished Eclipse…I was done. I had to wait with the others until 2008 for Breaking Dawn. And just what exactly was I going to do until the release? (of course if I had known just how cockblocking that book was..I may not have anticipated its release…or lack thereof…quite so much.)

My venture into fanfic was slow and tentative. It started by going to SM’s site then going to the Twilight Lexicon that was mentioned there. There I happened to look at the side bar and notice something or other about Twilight fanfic. *click* and it took me to some Lexicon affiliated fanfic site. There were endless possibilities. But since I was such a newbie over this stuff, I stuck to the stories that continued where Eclipse left off. I read a few things here and there but found myself slightly dissatisfied with what was offered. I wanted something more…substantial. So I googled “Twilight Fanfic” (insert giggles from RPatz saying “google it” here).

FF.net was at the top of the list. So *click* and I was on my way to exploring the wonderful world of fanficdom. Somehow I managed to discover this little thing called an M rating…and it changed my world completely. You mean there are fanfics with SEX in it? Not only vamp sex, but human sex. The world of AH cracked itself wide open to me. I stumbled upon Jandco’s Cullen's Island. And it was…like whoa. Not only did she write extremely well, but she updated often, and I mean…there was the sex. Then there was Amethyst Jackson’s Only Human, the first fic I fangirled over. My reading list grew exponentially from there. I was getting so many updates in my box I had stopped reading actual paper books at this point.

For whatever reason, I felt this increasing need to write something myself. I don’t really know why, but I did. Maybe it was to prove to myself I could do it. Maybe it was because I had always wanted to take a stab at writing my “own” things. Either way I did it. I wrote and wrote and wrote, several chapters in fact, before working up the nerve to create an account so I could post. Then, I got so pissed at the 3 day or whatever waiting period after creating an account that I was so fucking jittery. The blessed day arrived when I could actually use my account and away I went, no looking back.

Private Tutor became my baby, one of my top priorities; ranked below Mini Mary and tied with the Hubs (I kid, I kid. I don’t avoid my family…I swear). There were times that I got frustrated with the fandom…random nonsense getting in the way. Whenever I got downhearted over some of the BS I felt was going on, I’d get some amazing review or a PM from a reader wondering when I’d update, and the pull to keep writing would suck me back into things. You have no idea what it does for the author. And I have forged a lot of good friendships over communication started from reviews or other PMs.

Life has never been the same. I am unconditionally and irrevocably in love with Twific. And apparently, also a giant nerd as I used one of the fucking most common quotes from the book to twist for my own personal use. *sigh*

Some things you may or may not know about me:
*I handwrite most everything. Only on rare occasion do I sit down to lappy in order to write out an entire chapter. You should see all the notebooks I have filled with PT, TAITA, and the one-shots I have written for various contests.
*Apparently I really like starting sentences with the word “and.” And (haha) my usage of “…” is unparalleled. Seriously, I don’t mean to use it but…it just pops up. If it annoys you, tell me. I promise to try and rein it in.
*I won’t caps anything unless it’s absolutely necessary. Like this post. If it were up to me, everything would be lowercase. I just can’t be bothered to press that shift button. I’m lazy, I know this.
*I am sensitive about my age, or rather, how old I look. I am 25 but have been told by more than enough people that I look 18. I ask you, do I seriously look that young? *I love music. I don’t think I can ever not include it in some way with my writings. That is all.
*I don’t like beer, unless it is of the “bitch” variety. It’s just not my thing I guess.
*I love sleep…but sleep is not my friend. I am up way too late (not by choice). This is why I am posting at almost 2am. *edited* AFTER 2am...
*I get really long winded…hence this post. I don’t think that piece of info should come as a shock to any of you.
*I hate going to the doctor’s. Seriously…you can ask a lot of people. I suffer from migraines and have been in need of a doc visit for some meds and have yet to go. For whatever reason, I think most doctors are full of shit. Now, if Edward was my doctor, I’d have no qualms about going in for regular checkups. That being said…
Let me tell you about this little story I am currently fangirling over by the title of “Save You,” written by socact (Ironically the author is in med school. I swear, no offense to you socact. I’d go pay you a visit if I needed a doc). I say it’s little but really it’s an epic fic. (and please excuse my pitiful attempts at making a banner adequate for this story)
Summary: Edward is a brilliant, troubled doctor who uses medicine to escape his past, until he meets a beautiful patient whose mysterious, debilitating disease challenges everything he knows about life and death. Can he save her? Can she save him? AH, ExB, Rated M
The story revolves around Edward, an emotionally distant doctor somewhat reminiscent of House, and Bella a pediatrician in her residency. She faints during a normal run through the streets of San Francisco. It wouldn’t seem like such a big deal, only her oxygen saturation levels are pretty abnormal (don’t ask me what that really means). Edward is asked to consult on her case, seeing how he’s basically the guy you go to when there are unexplained medical phenomena.
Edward insults, in typical AssWard fashion, and Bella actually talks back; something he is not used to since most are intimidated by him. The attraction is instant, though pushed down by both. Edward doesn’t feel the need to get close to anyone. Bella is offended at Edward’s comments towards her chosen field.
Bella’s sickness is the excuse Edward needs to keep seeing her, though admittedly he also feels very invested in her case. The reasoning behind that becomes clear in later chapters. Edward is determined to find the cause of the unfortunate things happening to Bella. The drama is strong, the emotions stronger. I cried, I will admit, at several parts of this story.
Luckily, the relationship that grows between them is enough to help me cope with the drama. I love how tentative Edward is, slowly changing and opening up, not only to Bella but colleagues and acquaintances. He finds ways to subtly admit that she is the reason behind his changing demeanor…and really the words he speaks to her make me tingle. They are very honest and just, wow. I haven’t felt that warm fuzzy feeling from reading in awhile.
Just when you think everything will be ok, news from Bella’s past calls into question Bella’s health. And that in turn, causes major heartfail. I won’t go into details. I will not spoil here! But rest assured, socact wants E/B together as much as the rest of us. Currently I am anticipating some much needed...reuniting
You have to read this beautifully written story. Because she is a med student, socact can very believably weave in the painful realities many suffer while working in the medical field. I also feel like I’ve learned so much just from her chapter titles (all named after an illness/disease/whatever). She continues to amaze me as, being a busy student, she manages to write an intricate story that updates fairly often (woot woot). Not only that, but it is amazing that she does not have more love for this fic. Remember what I said about appreciating reviews? She does too. Go show her some love.

Thursday, April 9, 2009

"Holding Out For You" ObsessingOverEdward

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